Uske hone se shaam khilkhilati hai,
jaise thandi hawa dil ko chhoo jaati hai…
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Wo aaye toh raatein bhi roshan ho jaati hain,
aur sitare zameen par utar aate hain…
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Kabhi wo khamoshi mein bhi kahaani likh jaati hai,
kabhi hansi se har gham ko bhula jaati hai…
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Na naam mein simti, na lafzon mein bandhi,
wo ek roshni hai… jo har dil mein jagmagati hai… 🌸
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Her presence makes the evening bloom with laughter,
like a gentle breeze that softly touches the heart…
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When she arrives, even the nights begin to glow,
as if the stars have descended to the earth…
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Sometimes she writes stories in silence,
sometimes her smile makes every sorrow fade away…
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Not bound by a name, nor confined in words,
she is a light… that shines in every heart… 🌸
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—Rajeshwari 🧿💕
Your piece feels like a soft breeze itself—gentle, luminous, and quietly enchanting. There’s a beautiful harmony between the Hindi and English lines, as if the emotion refuses to stay confined to one language and instead flows freely across both.. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much 💛 That’s such a beautiful way to see it… I truly appreciate it. I’ve always felt that some emotions don’t belong to just one language they find their own way to flow, and I’m really glad it reached you like that🤍✨
Such a tender and beautifully woven piece…
Each line feels like a soft whisper to the heart, leaving behind a quiet glow.
Thank you so much Vijay ji💛 That’s such a gentle and beautiful way to put it… I’m really glad it felt that way soft, quiet, and something that stays ✨
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Thank you so much 💛 I just read The Strangers Who See Us — it’s truly beautiful and deeply felt. I’m really glad you took this up and made it your own… it means a lot to see it come through your words so sincerely ✨🌻
So beautifully written! 😍 Your words here have brightened my day, and it really gently touched my heart. ☺️💜
You’re right! Her smile, beauty, and presence make boring evenings more peaceful, and dark nights glow. ✨️💖
Thank you so much 💛 Your words really touched me… I’m so glad it made you feel that way soft, peaceful, and a little brighter. That’s all I ever hope my writing can do ✨💜
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Nothing can be more passionate, not even passion herself
That’s such a beautiful line… thank you so much ✨
For your sake I deviated from grammar and made passion’s gender from neuter to feminine
That’s really sweet professor saheb… I like that touch. It makes it feel more personal 🤍
Waah Rajeshwari,Boht khoobsurat likha hai❤️
Thank you so much… so glad you liked it ❤️
So beautifully written! Love and passion flow in every line. My only request is to use the Devnagari script for the Hindi version, it looks elegant.💫💐💗
Thank you so much KK💫 I truly agree Devanagari adds such elegance… I’ll use it from next time 😊💐
So kind of you, Rajeshwari! You’re welcome 🙏
Nice one
Thank you so much ☺️ ✨
Most welcome 😊
Wah! Wah! Kya baat!!! Behad khubsurat!!!
Aww, thank you so much! 😊✨ Really glad you liked it 💛😍